Star Writing in Year 4

Bella’s Brilliant Story

Bella took great care to craft her story for our ‘hot write’ task. After having been inspired by a short animation, she wrote a short story about an adventure on the sea. Can you spot all of the fantastic features Bella included to describe the characters’ thoughts and feelings? After writing, Bella took even more care to edit and improve her work,  using some excellent spelling strategies to write her final piece. Well done Bella! 


Bella C
Year 4
March 2019